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Lonely Hearts

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Some people might complain,
If they have a lonely heart,
But in reality,
It's a brand-new shining start.

You're open to the world,
To go anywhere you please,
Whether lying on your bed,
Or walking through the trees.

But when you feel the love
Of someone by your side,
And it disapears,
You cannot help but cry.

And if you see some lady
Really happy with her man,
You run and go and sulk alone
(In the room to which you ran.)

You're jelous of all the friends
That have people that they date,
You want some of the "Action",
You just don't want to wait.
This poem is different from the others. In the begining, it's like in denile. Like they refuse to believe how much being alone hurts them inside. They don't realize it until they have love to compare it to.
<UPDATE>
I 've been meaning to put this addition on. It feels finished now.
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darkrane17's avatar
Tells a good story, but there must be more to it? :)